Monday, November 3, 2008

Tomar Kothha....

Akas jokhon mishbe tomar gaay
Mishiye niyo norom nilimay
Tomar kachhei mon kharaper chhuti
Mukh lukiye oshru biday ney,
Somoy jokhon kharap hoyei chole
Jani tumi kiser opekhhay
Akastake nijer majhe khNojo
Jhor ta uthe abar theme jay.
Surjo jokhon tomar jonyo sudhu
Diner belay aaloy-aalokmoy
Ratre tokhon jyotsna name abar
Tomar mone,tomar aanginay.
Shishir bheja sobuj norom ghase
Aalta makha tomar duti pay
Cholte hobe onekta poth eka
Swopno jodi hotat bhenge jay.
Tukro gulo chhoriye diyo pothe
Jodi tara mukto hote chay
Mukti tomar lokkhyo tarar majhe
Nijer proti nei je kono daay.

2 comments:

Kaushik Paul said...

Wonderful. A-B-C-B-D-B rhyming diye sei "Tumi"-tar kotha bolechis.

Ei line gulo khub bhalo laglo..

"Cholte hobe onekta poth eka
Swopno jodi hotat bhenge jay.
Tukro gulo chhoriye diyo pothe
Jodi tara mukto hote chay
"

Paulami Dey...Elo melo Hawa said...

Tomar lekha kobita guli mon chuye jai.
kothao hoito nijeo emon tai anuvab kori ar tai ....
kemon jeno apon mone hoi